Amar Bail | امر بیل Paperback – 20 November 2021

Amazing 👏 ❤️🎀 hai

Chummeshwari quality

I like it

Storywise, the novel is not that great but the dialogues are well written. Ending is emotional. The novel is not worth the hype.

Beautiful packaging,paper quality is too good,worth the money

What a beautiful novel.. Soo thick and the page quality is really good..This looks more prettier in real.. Storyline is amazing, you'll think about this story for soo long once you are done..🥺Go for it!!✨🙌🏻🤧

One of the Best choice for me to order this.

The novel is undoubtedly a phenomenal piece of art, yet it felt incomplete in several ways. The entire story was presented solely from Alizey’s perspective, which limited the reader’s understanding of the other characters—especially Umer. His thoughts, emotions, and reasons behind his decisions remained a mystery throughout.While I appreciated Umer’s character, his lack of perspective left me disconnected. There was little insight into his internal struggles or the rationale behind his choices. Perhaps the author intended to keep readers intrigued, but for me, it was frustrating not to grasp his point of view. His love for Alizey, for instance, was reduced to just a few lines by Judith—far too little to convey the depth of his feelings. Alizey deserved more. If nothing else, a diary from Umer’s side would have added much-needed depth. The lack of clarity was exasperating at times.Umer’s death, in particular, felt unnecessary and abrupt. I couldn’t understand the purpose behind it or why the author chose that ending. The idea that Alizey wouldn’t be happy with him seemed unfounded, and the story could have easily led to a beautiful, happy ending. The narrative was flowing well until the second-last chapter, but Umer’s death ruined the entire emotional build-up for me.Though the writing quality was strong, the transitions between flashbacks and the present were abrupt and confusing. There were several loose ends that the writer left unresolved, offering no clear justification for them. The theme of broken homes and their psychological impact was intense and well-portrayed, especially through Alizey’s character. Umer, too, came from a broken home, but his character was portrayed as calm and composed. Unfortunately, the lack of deeper exploration into his mindset made it difficult to understand his motivations.Overall, while the narrative had its strengths—especially in its thematic depth—the abrupt transitions and unresolved aspects left the story feeling incomplete.