Rules for the Sissy

Despite their preposterous plots, O'Neil's stories could have been entertaining, and the book offers astute lessons concerning the effects of male dominance upon women when “sissies” undergo similar treatment by dominant females. “Sissies serve. Sissies obey,” Alex learns. Although feminized, a sissy remains a male, his humiliation resulting from the denial of his masculinity, which makes him other than nature, perhaps, intends him to be. Unfortunately, the stories contain a multitude of grammatical errors. Unless O'Neil hires an editor to correct her mistakes or learns to care about her writing, it's best to avoid the frustration of reading her work.

This is actually a pretty good story spoiled by the innumerable incomprehensible phrases. The author might consider changing the voice recognition software to a better version or actually writing instead of dictating in order to grind out stories as quickly as possible. I’m just glad I read it through my subscription and didn’t pay for it.

I preferred the first of the two stories in this book despite the quite abrupt ending. The theme however was quite predictable and followed the theme of several other books I have read i.e. bratty youth placed under the control of a dominant woman for correction, crossdressing and training. I didn't really enjoy the other story which I found to be quite repetitive and a tad sadistic. I can't see me rushing back to re-read either of these stories any time soon.